Question

某英語雜志社舉辦以“科學飲食，健康生活”為主題的英語征文比賽。請你根據下表所列的內容要點，以“The healthier, the happier”為題寫一篇英語短文，介紹自己的生活方式，參加比賽。

要求： 1. 詞數80-100；2. 條理清楚，語義連貫，句式規范，字跡工整；

       3. 不得出現真實的人名﹑校名﹑地名等相關信息。

以前的生活方式	如今的生活方式	感 悟
內 容	對健康的影響
不吃早飯，吃太多的快餐；看太多的電視，過多地玩電腦游戲……	飲食	至少兩點	至少一點
睡眠
鍛煉
心理健康（傾訴、放松）

The healthier, the happier

In the past, I                                                                                                                 

                                                                                                                              

But now I                                                                                                              

                                                                                                                            

                                                                                                                           

I think                                                                    

                                                                                                                      

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

“The healthier, the happier”

In the past, I used to eat a lot of junk food, hardly ever do some exercise. So I am very fat, and always get ill.

I began to realize it is important for us to keep healthy.

Now I hardly ever eat junk food. In my free time, I take part in many sports. Thus I became more and more healthy. But do you know the ways to keep us healthy? I think if you do as the following ways. You will be healthy as me.

First, we need to have healthy eating habits, we can eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit, but we’d better eat less meat.

Then, playing sports every day can also help us keep fit. We should try to do more exercise every day.

Happiness is another way to keep healthy. When we are lonely or unhappy, try to make friends, it is a good way to keep us happy. If you smile often, you also feel happy. So, The healthier, the happier.

【解析】

試題分析：

這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發揮。寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內容利用上；結合材料內容，可知本文主要是第一二人稱，一般過去及現在時態進行敘述。語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如:hardly ever幾乎從來不；It is adj for sb to do sth，對某人來，說做某事怎么樣；take part in 參加；had better do sth最好做某事等。學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用, 讓文章更出彩。

考點：考查提綱類作文