Question

目前，學生考試作弊現象嚴重，請圍繞以下要點談談其中原因以及個人建議。
原因：1.考試太濫   2.自身勤奮不夠   3.把大量時間用在上網和玩游戲上  4.為了騙取家長和老師高興
看法與建議：1、作弊有害；2、要做人誠實，學習發奮；3、學校應減少考試。
要求：1、字數80—100；2、圍繞要點可適當發揮；3、文章開頭已給出，不計入總字數。
At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit——cheating in examinations.
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Answer 1

At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit — cheating in examinations.
There are three main reasons. First, schools have given students too many exams, some of them are too difficult.
Second, some students are not hard-working and they don’t work hard at their lessons. Third, they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet. So they haven’t enough time to prepare for the exams. Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.
In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study. We students should be honest and diligent, and
only in this way can we improve our study and make progress. Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves.

試題分析：首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關系，要求考生根據所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作。注意文章文體、人稱和時態。根據所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎充分發揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據情景的發展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。
【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如. a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit；Second, some students are not hard-working and they don’t work hard at their lessons還運用了短語does great harm to ；have enough time to prepare for 以及用了倒裝句only in this way can we improve our study and make progress.等。并注意了句子的銜接如：First，Second，Third，Finally，In my opinion, Besides等等。層次分明，表達流暢。