Question

綠色的環境能夠使我們健康、愉悅，成為環保達人已經是一種時尚。同學們，你們想成為環保達人嗎？那我們應該怎么做呢？請以To Be a Greener Person為題寫一篇短文。
詞數：80左右。
溫馨提示：1．短文中請勿使用真實姓名、地點、所在學校名稱。
2．這些詞匯也許對你有幫助：
save,  turn off,  less shopping,  walk,  bike,  cloth bag,  plant
                         
                                                                                    
                                                                                    

Answer 1

To Be a Greener Person
As we all know, good environment can make us healthy and feel happy. Being a Greener Person is a very popular thing. Do you want to be a greener person? I do. But how can we become a greener person? I think we must do something. For example, we should save water. When we brush our teeth, we should turn off water. We also should save electricity. When we leave a room, we must turn off the lights. We must walk to school or ride a bike instead of taking a car. What’s more, we should plant more trees, because it is good for our environment.

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們以如何做一名環保達人來寫一篇文章。這個題目是開放性的，在題目中并沒有給我們提供信息，這需要我們自己考慮，發揮想象力。寫作時，我們可以結合日常生活以及教材中有關環保話題的短語和句型發表自己的看法。如節約用水、用電、多種樹、交通工具要環保等等。題目中給我們提供的這些詞和短語是非常有用的，寫作時可以把他們用上。同時注意表達的準確性以及語句的連貫和流暢。本篇短文應主要使用一般現在時，第一人稱。
【亮點說明】這是一篇比較優秀的短文，在這篇短文中，作者結合自己的實際生活，利用自己所學過的關于環保的知識，將如何成為一名環保達人表達了出來。文章時態、人稱運用合理得當，符合題目的要求。在短文中作者給了我們一些環保的建議，如save water and electricity、ride a bike to school、plant more trees等，這些建議都是非常合理的，符合題意的。表達時運用句式正確，連貫。如I think we must do something、When we leave a room, we must turn off the lights.、We must walk to school or ride a bike instead of taking a car.、What’s more, we should plant more trees, because it is good for our environment。