Question

五一長假即將來臨，作為初三畢業生的你，打算怎樣度過這個假期？你會和家人去旅行還是呆在家里認真復習？根據下面的建議，請你給自己寫個五一假期計劃。
我先要制定好計劃如何安排我的假期,以確保勞逸結合。
我要認真完成所有的作業，絕不馬虎對待。必要時打電話問老師。
我還要進行體育鍛煉,為嚴格的體育考試做準備。
我還要……。
要求：涵蓋以上要點，不出現真實姓名。
字數在80左右，開頭已給出，不計入詞數。
The May Day holiday is coming soon. As a senior, who will finish school in less than sixty days, I will make full use of the holiday.___________________________________    

Answer 1

The May Day holiday is coming soon. As a senior who will finish school in less than sixty days, I will make full use of the holiday. First I need to make a plan for this holiday so that I can learn well and have a good rest as well. I must finish all my homework carefully, I mustn’t be careless with my homework. When I have problems with my homework, I will call my teachers to ask for help if necessary. And I plan to take exercise to get ready for the strict PE tests. I plan to go over/review my notes, I don’t want to waste the time, After June, when I take exams, I think I can have a really relaxing holiday.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，要求給自己制定一個五一假期計劃。本題給出的材料較為簡略，動筆前應先認真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內容，確定主要短語，句式等問題。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時態為一般將來時態，這方面需要注意的問題比較少。動筆前可以按照材料內容列出簡單提綱，寫出關鍵單詞。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系。上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞。
點評：做英語書面表達時，要注意認真審題，分析體裁，確定時態；分析內容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤。