Question

根據下面表格信息寫一篇短文，介紹該校學生參加各種活動的情況。首句已給出。

Activity	Every Day	Once or Twice a week	Three or Four Times a week
Watch TV	85%	2%	13%
Use the Internet	0%	44%	56%
Read English Books	90%	10%	0%
Exercise	15%	10%	75%

 

Answer 1

 
Here are the results of the student activity at No. 1 Middle School. According to the survey, most students watch TV everyday. Some students watch TV three or four times a week. And only 2% students watch TV once or twice a week. All students use the internet. Some use it once or twice a week, but more students use it three or four times a week. They think from the internet they can learn much useful information. As for reading English books, 90% students read English book everyday, and the left 10% students read them once or twice a week. Exercise is important for students. Most students exercise three or four times a week. And about 10% students exercise once or twice a week. About 15% students do sports everyday.

試題分析：這是一篇看圖表作文。表格中包含了4項活動，以及各項活動調查結果。寫作時要理清要點，不要出現遺漏。并將各要點的內容用正確的語言表述出來。在陳述時可適當使用不同的詞語，使文章更生動。也可加入一些總結性的，承接性的句子和短語，讓文章更流暢和富有邏輯。
【亮點說明】這篇文章緊扣材料，要點完整，表達清晰流暢。文中用到了一些不錯的短語和表達方式，如：According to the survey,根據調查；Some use it once or twice a week, but more students use it three or four times a week.一些同學一周使用一兩次，但更多的同學一周兩三次。But使兩個句子形成了對比，而且用到了比較級。Exercise is important for students.運動對學生很重要。這是個承接句子，引出了下文。