Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Wang Lin is a child who has grown up in the SOS Children’s Village. It was in 1992 he was sent there.At that time she was only four years old. Fortunately, he met many kind and warm-hearted worker. They took good care of him and he lived a happily life. Two years ago, he was admitted to an university. Upon heard the news, all the people in the village feel very glad. ＂He is an intelligent but hard-working boy. He set a good example for the children here, and we are all proud for him,＂ one worker said. Wang Lin loves the village and the people there, so he is often returns to see them whenever he is free.

Answer 1

【答案】

Wang Lin is a child who has grown up in the SOS Children’s Village. It was in 1992 ∧he was sent

that

there.At that time she was only four years old. Fortunately, he met many kind and warm-hearted

he

worker. They took good care of him and he lived a happily life. Two years ago, he was admitted

workers happy

to an university. Upon heard the news, all the people in the village feel very glad. ＂He is an

a hearing felt

intelligent but hard-working boy. He set a good example for the children here, and we are all

and

proud for him,＂ one worker said. Wang Lin loves the village and the people there, so he often

of

returns to see them whenever he is free.

【解析】

1. 第二句 在he前面加that 此處是強調句型，強調的是時間狀語in 1992，故需要加that構成強調句型的基本框架。

2. 第三句 she → he 從全文看，Wang Lin是個男孩子，應該用he指代。

3. 第四句 worker → workers 前面修飾語是many，而且下文用They指代，故此處用名詞復數形式。

4. 第五句 happily → happy 修飾名詞應該用形容詞，故把happily改為happy。

5. 第六句 an → a university是以輔音音素開頭的單詞，應該用不定冠詞a。

6. 第七句 heard → hearing 介詞后面用動名詞形式，Upon doing sth意思是＂一……就＂。

7. 第七句 feel → felt 從語境判斷應該用一般過去時態，故把feel改為felt。

8. 第八句 but → and 前后兩個形容詞是并列關系，且此處表示＂又，且＂，故把but改為and。

9. 第九句 for → of 固定短語be proud of的意思是＂因……而驕傲/自豪＂，故把for改為of。

10. 第十句 去掉is return是實義動詞，而且此處不是進行時態，也不需要用被動形式，故去掉is。