Question

【題目】短文改錯

下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Yesterday I happened to meet a young America student in the Palace Museum. This was the first time that I has met a foreigner, so I went up and greeted him with English. He told me that he was a college student travel in China and he liked China very much. I volunteered to show him around the museum. He was deep impressed with the Chinese buildings and busy with taking photos all the time. He said never before had he seen so beautiful buildings. After that, we went boating on a lake but had a good time. I was very glad to have such a good chance to practice my speaking English.

Answer 1

【答案】

Yesterday I happened to meet a young America student in the Palace Museum. This was the first

American

time that I has met a foreigner, so I went up and greeted him with English. He told me that he

had in

was a college student travel in China and ∧ he liked China very much. I volunteered to show

traveling/travelling that

him around the museum. He was deep impressed with the Chinese buildings and busy with taking

deeply

photos all the time. He said never before had he seen so beautiful buildings. After that, we went

such

boating on a lake but had a good time. I was very glad to have such a good chance to practice

and

my speaking English.

spoken

【1】America→American

【2】has→had

【3】with →in

【4】travel→travelling/ traveling

【5】and后面加 that

【6】deep →deeply

【7】去掉with

【8】so→ such

【9】but→ and

【10】speaking →spoken

【解析】

文章大意：昨天我碰巧遇到一個外國人，我們在一起游玩，交流。他對中國的建筑非常贊賞，而且拍了很多照片。我非常高興有這次練習口語的機會。

【1】America→American 修飾名詞用形容詞American。

【2】has→had 在句型“It/This was the first time that從句 ”中that從句用過去完成時，把has改為had。

【3】with →in 用某種語言，介詞用in。

【4】travel→travelling/ traveling 此處是非謂語短語做定語，被修飾詞student和travel之間是主動關系，用現在分詞，把travel改為travelling/ traveling。

【5】and后面加 that 兩個陳述句做賓語從句時第二個賓語從句中的that不能省略，故在and后面加 that。

【6】deep →deeply 此處表示“深深地”，用deeply。

【7】去掉with 固定短語：be busy doing sth 或be busy with sth，故去掉with。

【8】so→ such so不能修飾復數名詞，改為such。

【9】but→ and 根據句意可知此處是順承關系，把but改為and。

【10】speaking →spoken spoken English“口語”，把speaking改為spoken。