Question

【題目】Correction 3(2017屆 廣西南寧、欽州高三模考)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號 (∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線 (\) 劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Last Friday, our class was invited an old craftsman to teach us how to making dough figurine(面人).When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him warm welcome and two boy helped him with the tool box. First, he shows us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him or watched attentively. Then we started to have a try itself. The old man walked around and helped us patient. Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking on the figurines, we were all very exciting. We hope we can have more activity of this kind!

Answer 1

【答案】

Last Friday, our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how to dough figurine(面人).When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him warm welcome and two boy helped him with the tool box. First, he us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him watched attentively. Then we started to have a try . The old man walked around and helped us . Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking the figurines, we were all very . We hope we can have more of this kind!

【解析】

第一處：句意：上星期五，我們班邀請了一位老藝人教我們如何做面人。此處不應該是＂被邀請＂，不能用被動語態。故去掉was。

第二處：句意：上星期五，我們班邀請了一位老藝人教我們如何做面人。teach sb. how to do sth.是固定搭配，指＂教給某人做某事＂。故making改為make。

第三處：give sb. a warm welcome指＂熱烈歡迎某人＂。故warm前面加a。

第四處：文章一開始有時間狀語Last Friday，所以用一般過去時態。故shows改為showed。

第五處：句意：我們都站在他的周圍，認真地觀察。stood和watched是順承關系，而不是選擇。故or改為and。

第六處：句子的主語是we，所以此處指＂我們自己嘗試＂。故itself改為ourselves。

第七處：修飾謂語動詞helped要用副詞，指＂耐心地幫助我們＂。故patient改為patiently。

第八處：look at是固定搭配。故on改為at。

第九處：此處指＂我們非常興奮＂，表示內心的感覺用-ed結尾的形容詞。故exciting改為excited。

第十處：句意：我們希望我們能有更多的這種活動！此處應該用名詞的復數形式。故activity改為activities。