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短文改錯
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Dear sir,
  I'm glad to recommend (推薦) you to my friend Li Ming. Li Ming was born in July 15 , 1974 in
Beijing. He graduated from Xisi Primary School in 1986 .        
  When he was in the middle school, he did good in maths, physics and chemistry and fond of art.
After graduating from No. 4 High School, he entered   Beijing University study physics. After four
year of hard work there, he went to the United States for further study. Because of his excellent
work, he get a doctor's degree in physics in this year. He is now in good health but would like to
make contributions to our country. I will be most gratefully if you consider my recommendation.
Looking forward to receive your early reply
                                                                                          Yours truly,
                                                                                           Wang Lin
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Answer 1

 

Dear sir,
I'm glad to recommend (推薦) you to my friend Li Ming. Li Ming was born
in July 15 , 1974 in Beijing.He graduated from Xisi Primary School in 1986 .      
1. on
When he was in the middle school, he did good in maths, physics and chemistry
                                                               2. well
and ∧fond of art. After graduating from No. 4 High School, he entered
   3.  was
Beijing University ∧study physics. After four year of hard work there,
                         4.  to                                5.  years
he went to the United States for further study. Because of his excellent
work, he get a doctor's degree in physics in this year. He is now in good 
         6.  got                                       7. 去掉                      
health but would like to make contributions to our country．I will be most 
       8. and
gratefully if you consider my recommendation．
 9. grateful
Looking forward to receive your early reply
                          10. receiving
                                                                  Yours truly,
                                                                   Wang Lin