Question

假如你是李華。去年夏天，你在一家國際中學生夏令營幫忙，收獲頗多。今年，你想邀請你的好友Jane一起為夏令營工作。請你根據該夏令營的招聘廣告及所給內容要點寫一封信，說服Jane和你一同參加。開頭已為你寫好。（字數120詞左右）

Dear Jane,

I have already told you about the job I did last summer in the International Camp for children, do you remember? And this year they are looking for people for the same job so I      

                                                                                     

                                                                                       

                                                                                      

                                                                                      

                                                                                       

 

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Dear Jane,

I have already told you about the job I did last summer in the International Camp for children, do you remember? And this year they are looking for people for the same job so I have thought about you. Why don’t we do it together?

You will work with children between 8 and 12 and will help with the outdoor activities, sports competition and children’s games. The camp is situated in a wood, close to a river. It is such a beautiful place! Everybody sleeps in tents, it is very exciting. We have only 5 hours’ work a day so it gives us enough free time to visit the area and do some sport activities on our own. As well as the accommodation, the food is free. It is not wonderful, but it is not the most important.

(The contact with children, the feeling of freedom, the sense of responsibility and the life in the nature make from this camp an unforgettable experience.)

Let me know as soon as possible if you are interested in it, but don’t hesitate too much, it is worth!

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇作文稍有難度，不僅要描述廣告里的內容，還需要自己組織語言，不能照抄廣告。而且還需加一些自己勸服她一起去參加的句子。注意分段，不能一片到頭只有一段。注意控制字數，盡量使用復合句和高級詞匯。