Question

假定你班在“珍愛生命，拒闖紅燈”教育活動(dòng)中，召開了一次主題班會(huì)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表中的內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇短文。

行人闖紅燈的危害	1．妨礙交通，影響車輛的正常行駛。
	2．容易引發(fā)事故，危及他人和自身的生命安全。
	3．……（自己設(shè)想）
對(duì)行人闖紅燈的處罰措施	1．批評(píng)教育，讓其意識(shí)到闖紅燈的危害性。
	2．當(dāng)場(chǎng)給予警告并罰款。
	3．……（自己設(shè)想）

 
注意：
1．內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意行文連貫；
2．詞數(shù)：120左右。
參考詞匯：pedestrian n.（行人）；jay-walk vi.（亂穿馬路）; reprimand vt.（批評(píng)，訓(xùn)誡）

Answer 1

不唯一
Recently we held a class meeting to discuss the problem of pedestrians crossing the street while the traffic light is red. As we can see, some pedestrians don’t obey traffic rules and jay-walk frequently. This blocks traffic, seriously affects drivers and causes accidents to happen, endangering the safety of pedestrians and drivers alike. In a word, jay-walking produces negative effects and does not help to develop good social behavior.
It is really a pity to see all this in our society and to deal with the situation, the government has taken some measures. When caught jay-walking, pedestrians are reprimanded so that they will become aware of the dangers of doing this, or they are fined on the spot. Sometimes the traffic police will report jaywalkers to their workplace and expose them to the public. However, it will still take a long time to stop pedestrians from jay-walking.

解析試題分析：首先要仔細(xì)審題，確定人稱，時(shí)態(tài)，文體。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要全面，上下段要使用連接詞做到連貫。所選內(nèi)容與我們的生活相關(guān)，也可能考生也做過這種闖紅燈的事情。考生只要把所給要點(diǎn)逐條陳述，適度發(fā)揮，不要逐句翻譯，注意使用一些過渡句或過渡詞來使句子讀起來流暢。但是要注意使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)。
考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：為了避免太多單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤，語法錯(cuò)誤，不要為了追求詞語的華麗而堆積一些自己也沒把握的單詞，不要刻意追求長(zhǎng)句而寫一些自己不知對(duì)錯(cuò)的有多個(gè)從句組成的長(zhǎng)句。考試時(shí)最好選擇自己最有把握的詞匯，短語，句式。