Question

假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班的學(xué)生李華，為迎接第九屆園博會的召開，上周日你們班組織了一系列公益、宣傳活動。請根據(jù)下面的四幅圖畫，敘敘你們的活動，并向你校英文報(bào)投稿。
注意：1。文章的開頭已為你寫好。
2．詞數(shù)不少于60。

The 9^th China International Garden Expo is opening soon. _____________________________

Answer 1

One possible version:
The 9^th China International Garden Expo is opening soon. We are very excited because it will be held in Fengtai District, the place where we live and study. All of my classmates agree that we should do something for it. So last Sunday morning we came to some busy streets and sent to the passersby colorful brochures introducing the Expo. Then we went to the spot where free car stickers were handed out. We helped the drivers put the stickers on their cars, hoping the concept of green lifestyle will spread as those cars run around the city.
In the afternoon, we came to the Garden Expo park to plant trees. Some of us dug holes. Some planted young trees and others watered them. Seeing the lines of trees, we had a wonderful sense of achievement. When walking around the park, we were attracted by its beauty and some of us couldn’t help taking part in a contest, drawing the Garden Expo in their minds.
It was a busy and tiring day, but all of us felt really happy and proud to make our contributions to the Garden Expo.  

解析試題分析：這是一篇看圖寫作，一共四幅圖。做題時：1. 認(rèn)真讀圖，可知四幅圖講述的是為迎接第九屆園博會的召開，上周日你們班組織了一系列公益、宣傳活動。2. 初步構(gòu)思，考慮用詞、短語、句型和時態(tài)。3. 連詞成句，然后再連句成文。盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容。4. 反復(fù)審核，修改錯誤。5. 注意所給的漢語提示。一般說來，看圖寫話中的漢語提示往往給定了有關(guān)的時間、地點(diǎn)、人物等相關(guān)的信息，還有參考詞匯都是有用信息。
考點(diǎn)：看圖寫作
點(diǎn)評：在把握了文章的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語、短語和句型，以充分地表達(dá)文章的內(nèi)容。這是體現(xiàn)自身能力的重要一環(huán)。然后再將各圖的單個句子串連起來。串連時，要注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞語或過渡性語句，不至于讓讀者覺得文章中出現(xiàn)跳躍現(xiàn)象，更使上下文更為緊湊、自然。