Question

一年一度的校園文化節又拉開了序幕，但今年學生卻沒有表現出像往年的興趣和熱情面對這一現象，有人提出校園文化節還要不要舉辦的問題，這引起了同學們的討論。上周末你班也進行了一場討論。大多數同學都支持校園文化節，請你根據下面所提供的內容將討論結果做一總結，字數100左右。

支持的原因：1. 給學生創造了展示自我才華的舞臺；

2. 有利于提高學習興趣；

3.豐富校園文化，活躍校園氣氛。

注意：1. 行文連貫，內容完整；

2. 題目和開頭語已給出，不計入總詞數；

3. 總詞數100左右。

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The annual campus cultural festival has drawn back its curtain again, but this year students did not show their great interest and passion for it as before.__________________________________

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Answer 1

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One possible version：

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  The annual campus cultural festival has drawn back its curtain again , but this year students did not show their great interest and passion for it as before .Many students believe that campus cultural festival can offer a wonderful stage for students to show their talents.Apart from helping students promote their interest in study, a series of activities also enrich the campus culture and make campus atmosphere more active.

  In addition , more students will be motivated to develop their potential abilities which will make them qualified for their future positions .On the other hand , students will find it a good chance to relax themselves as well as gain much knowledge that can’t be found in the book.

【解析】

試題分析：此篇書面表達要求對校園文化節還要不要舉辦的討論結果做出總結。在寫作時同學們要注意先要說明討論的事件，然后再講述討論結果。在講述事件時可以用一般過去時態，而在發表個人見解時須采用一般現在時或者根據需要使用一般將來時態。此外在寫作時注意不要遺漏要點，而且還要恰當選用連接詞以使行文連貫，結構緊湊。

【亮點說明】文章要點全面，語言豐富。短文中高級詞匯motivated，qualified，promote以及長句的使用顯示了作者較高的語言運用能力，而且短語Apart from helping students promote their interest in study, In addition，On the other hand 等的恰當使用不僅使文章上下銜接緊湊，語句連貫，而且也避免了文章句式的單一，總之這是一篇不錯的范文。

考點：考查提綱作文。