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第二節：書面表達(滿分25分)
假設你叫李華，是一家英文雜志社的心理咨詢師。某中學生小王給你寫信，提到自己偏胖，想節食減肥，征求你的意見。請你給她回一封信，談談你對該問題的見解。內容要點如下：
1．健康比漂亮更重要；
2．學生以學習為主，不要過于注重外貌和別人的看法；
3．可通過多鍛煉身體保持健康，要改變不良的飲食習慣；
4．健康的心態也很重要。
注意：
1．短文必須包括所有內容要點，可適當發揮；
2．詞數：100左右。
3．參考詞匯：state of mind 心態
Dear Xiao Wang,
I have received and read your letter, in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting.                                                    
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Yours                                                          
Li Hua   

Answer 1

One possible version：
Dear Xiao Wang,
I have received and read your letter, in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting.
It is only natural that young girls at your age hope to look beautiful. However, in my opinion, health is more important than beauty. For a student, studying is the first thing to consider while appearance is the second. So do not let others' opinions affect your normal life. However, if you do want to lose weight, it is a good idea to do it by getting more exercise and changing unhealthy eating habits. The most important thing is that you keep a healthy state of mind, as it will help with your studies, and will also help you overcome difficulties in dieting.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you and I'm looking forward to your next letter.
Yours,
Li Hua

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