Question

 

       短文中有10處語言錯(cuò)誤。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

       增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧）,并在其下方寫出該加的詞。

       刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

       修改：在錯(cuò)詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

       注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Dear Mary,

       How are you? Today I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you．I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education．One hundreds and twenty students took exams but only a few was chosen and I was one of them．However, my parents are not happy about it．They are strong against me going there．They say it is too far away that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid I will feel lonely．They couldn’t imagine a girl so young living alone．They advise me to study in the capital instead．Then I’ll be able to continue living with us．Why can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up?

Best Wishes

Jane

第二節(jié)： 書面表達(dá)

       雙鴨山電視臺近日播放了一則新聞，某小區(qū)一到早上5點(diǎn)左右，就有一些老人放著音樂晨練，引起了一些青年人的不滿，他們說噪音影響了他們休息。你們班就此開了一個(gè)英語班會。請你以Music or Noise為題，寫一篇120左右詞的英語短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

Music or Noise

       Recently, many old people did morning exercises to music at about 5 o’clock in the morning, which dissatisfied young people．They complained that the noise had disturbed their sleep．

       As we all know, music plays an important role in our lives．Music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere．It reduces our tiredness and brings us relaxation after hard work and study．Listening to light music also makes us feel happy and comfortable．

       However, as the saying goes, every coin has two sides．Music at wrong place or time may be noise to others, especially with your loud music．If your music becomes others’ noise, it can destroy your relationship with your neighbors．Whatever we do, we should think about other people’s feelings．