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第二節：書面表達（共25分）
情景作文（共1 小題，25分）
最近你們班的同學對去年合肥市中小學生發生交通事故及其原因作了一次調查。他們分析了其造成事故的原因并提出了一些建議。

原   因	司機： 司機開車精力不集中，駕車時打手機 超速行駛(drive over the speed limit) 酒后駕車
	學生： 乘坐摩的(by motorcycle)上學 在機動車車道（lane/roadway）上騎自行車 不走地下通道(take underground tunnels)，橫穿馬路 邊走邊看書、聽音樂
建   議	交通部門（the Traffic Department）強調司機的交通安全意識，加大處罰違章司機的力度。 學校加強學生安全教育，讓他們珍愛生命。

請根據以上內容用英語寫一篇短文，報告你們班的調查結果(開頭已給出)。字數，120字左右。
Recently our classmates did a survey about the traffic accident to pupils and middle school students and its causes. The results are as follows.
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Answer 1

Recently our classmates did a survey about the traffic accident to pupils and middle school students and its causes. The results are as follows.
There is no denying that both drivers and students should bear responsibilities. On one hand, drivers can not concentrate their mind and make a phone call when driving. Some drivers even drive over the speed limit and ignore the passers-by’s existence. What’s worse, some drive after drinking, which is one of the main causes of the traffic accident. On the other hand, the students are lacking in safety consciousness. They often do something that disobey traffic rules, such as going to school. by motorcycle, riding on roadways/ lanes, walking across streets rather than taking underground tunnels, and reading and listening to music while walking. Unfortunately, all of these aspects result in the terrible accident, which do great harm to both families.
Personally, I think the Traffic Department should attach the importance of safety consciousness to the drivers. Meanwhile, some drivers who violate the traffic law should be punished seriously. As for young students, teachers and parents should strengthen children’s safety education and teach them how to protect themselves and value their lives.

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