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第三節(jié)書(shū)面表達(dá)(滿分30分)
假如你是市一中的學(xué)生，名叫王紅。你要用下面的材料給本市一家報(bào)刊的編輯寫(xiě)一封信，反映你校受污染的問(wèn)題，呼吁有關(guān)部門采取措施，保護(hù)環(huán)境，防止污染。
你校位于山腳下，一條小河從旁邊流過(guò)，校園內(nèi)樹(shù)木四季常青，鮮花爭(zhēng)艷，景色美似花園，但兩年前，附近建起了一個(gè)化工廠，排出大量污水和廢氣，造成校園污染，嚴(yán)重影響了師生健康。請(qǐng)有關(guān)部門出面解決這一問(wèn)題。
詞數(shù)：120左右。
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Dear Editor，   
My name is Wang Hong，a student from No．1 Middle Schoo1．Our school lies at the foot of a mountain with a small river passing by．It used to look like a beautiful garden．There used to be green trees and all kinds of flowers in our school yard all year round．
But great changes have taken place since a chemical factory was built Dear our school two years ago．It produces poisonous gases and pours a large amount of waste water into the river，which has done great harm to us students and teachers as well as to the surroundings．
It’s time for us to take steps to protect our surroundings and prevent them from being polluted．  
Yours Sincerely，
Wang Hong

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