Question

假如你是紅星中學學生會主席李明，根據學校安排，你給即將到你校任教的外籍教師Jack推薦一名學生助手（assistant）。請根據所給提示給Jack寫封推薦信。

1. 歡迎Jack的到來；

2. 推薦劉佳做學生助手；

3. 劉佳的基本情況（18歲，高三學生，學校十佳學生）；

4. 劉佳的特點與特長（活潑、樂觀；電腦技能；溝通能力；英語水平等）。

注意：詞數：120~150；可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

                                                                                 

                                                                                 

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Jack,

I’m Li Ming, Chairman of the students’ Union of Hongxing Middle School. It’s great to hear that you are going to teach in our school next semester/term.

I was asked to write to you to recommend Liu Jia, a Senior 3 student of 18, to be your assistant. Liu Jia is a friendly, active and optimistic girl. She is also a smart girl who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others. What’s more, she is one of the top ten students in our school, and her spoken English is extremely excellent. I’m sure she can be helpful in your work and life in China.

If you have any questions about it, please contact me.

I’m looking forward to your coming.

                                                Yours，

                                                Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：本文是書信類作文，要求根據所給提示給Jack寫封推薦信，文章的要點也基本上都給出來了，而且很具體，考生要把要點解釋清楚，不能有遺漏。在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，如強調句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時在列舉措施的時候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時不要啰嗦，力求簡潔。

【亮點說明】所給范文語言簡潔，應用了一些較好的詞組和句子：look forward to盼望，have a gift for有…天賦， It’s great to hear that you are going to teach in our school next semester/term.這句話用了it做形式主語， She is also a smart girl who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others. 這句話用了定語從句，還有文章還使用了What’s more, 這樣的關聯詞使文章更加連貫。

考點：考查書信類書面表達