Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
My young cousin Tom seems to have endless question to ask every day. One day, he asked me how life on earth began after watch a film. To be honest, the question remains a puzzle to me. Therefore, in order not to let him down, I found the answer in a book. It says, “Long ago the earth was a cloud dust. The dust settled into a solid globe before billions of years. The earth became such violent that it exploded loud. Then water, that is important for life to develop, began to appear. As the time went on, different life forms began.”

Answer 1

【小題1】question → questions
【小題2】watch → watching
【小題3】remains → remained
【小題4】Therefore → However
【小題5】cloud后加of
【小題6】before → after
【小題7】such → so
【小題8】loud → loudly
【小題9】that → which
【小題10】去掉the

解析試題分析：
【小題1】question是可數名詞，endless后面是可數名詞復數 questions
【小題2】after這里是介詞，后面接動名詞：watch → watching
【小題3】這篇文章用的是過去時：remains → remained
【小題4】這些問題對我來說是個迷，但是為了不讓他失望，我在書上找到答案：Therefore → However
【小題5】a cloud of是詞組“一片”，cloud后加of
【小題6】在幾十億年后，灰塵變成了固體的地球：before → after
【小題7】修飾形容詞副詞用so，such → so
【小題8】修飾動詞：exploded 應該是副詞：loud → loudly
【小題9】這是非限制性定語從句，不能用that引導，用which：that → which
【小題10】這里的time是抽象名詞“時間”，不加冠詞，去掉the
考點：考查各種語法的綜合運用
點評：短文改錯對考生的語法和上下文串聯的要求最高。考生要非常細心的串聯上下文進行語法分析，再提出修改。