Question

閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

　　Most people think it's fine to be “busy as a beaver(海貍)．” But actually, although beavers may work hard, often they don't get much done．

　　Beavers are good at building dams and most beaver dams are wonders of engineering．The best ones are strongly built of trees, stones, and mud．They are wide at the bottom and narrow at the top．

　　Beavers think nothing of building a dam more than two hundred feet long．One dam, in Montana, was more than two thousand feet long．The largest one ever seen was in New Hampshire．It stretched four thousand feet．It made a lake large enough to hold forty beaver homes．

　　So beavers do build good dams．But they don't always build them in the right places．They just don't plan．They will build a dam across the widest part of the stream．They don't try to find a place where the stream is narrow．So a lot of their hard work is wasted．

　　Beavers should learn that it's not enough to be busy．You have to know what you're doing, too．For example, there was one Oregon beaver that really was a worker．It decided to fix a hole in a man-made dam．After five days of work it gave up．The hole it was trying to fill was the space that boats go through．

[寫作內(nèi)容]

1．以約30詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。

2．以約120詞就“制定規(guī)劃與達(dá)成目標(biāo)”這一主題進(jìn)行議論，內(nèi)容包括：

(1)海貍修水壩的故事給你的啟示是什么？

(2)請結(jié)合你的生活經(jīng)歷闡述“制定規(guī)劃與達(dá)成目標(biāo)”之間的關(guān)系。

[寫作要求]

1．作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事．也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]

概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語篇連貫。

Answer 1

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解析：

Beavers are very diligent dam-builders who can build extremely good dams．However, they sometimes don't know where to build the dams or which dams should be fixed only because they have no consciousness to make a plan． 　　The beavers' story illustrates the importance of planning．Without a plan the best intentions and efforts will not produce results．We shouldn't work blindly but have a clear idea of our purpose, the actions needed to achieve it, and how these should be ordered． 　　As a junior student, I achieved considerable success in learning English through the combination of hard work and planning．I prepared good materials with the help of my teacher, made plans for my daily study and self-monitored the whole process of my learning．I made rapid progress and became very confident．I think I couldn't have done it without a good plan． 　　Diligence is a key to success, but in my opinion, good plan is also essential．Through planning, we can develop clear goals, find more efficient and effective methods and thus have more opportunities to reach our goals than through hardworking alone．