Question

你接受了一項(xiàng)寫(xiě)作任務(wù)，要為英語(yǔ)校報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇時(shí)事快訊。

[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息，寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于移民火星的快訊

志愿者的選拔 到2015年，在全球選出約30名去火星*的志愿者 志愿者的條件 至少18歲；做好不回地球的準(zhǔn)備；愿與他人保持良好的關(guān)系。 專(zhuān)家觀點(diǎn) 火星生活條件太艱苦；面臨嚴(yán)寒氣候、孤獨(dú)和恐懼。 志愿者觀點(diǎn) 厭倦地球生活，想體驗(yàn)火星生活； 如果成功，就是人類(lèi)英雄。

 

*火星： the Mars

[寫(xiě)作要求]

只能用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容

[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]

句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章連貫。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Version 1

About thirty volunteers will be chosen from all over the world by 2015 to go to the Mars. The volunteers must be over eighteen years old, prepared not to return to the earth, and willing to keep a good relationship with other people. Some experts think that the living conditions on the Mars are hard because it is difficult for the volunteers to face the cold weather, loneliness and fear. The volunteers believe that if they are successful, they will become the heroes of human beings. What’s more, they are tired of living on the earth, so they want to experience the life on the Mars.

Version 2

By 2015, about thirty volunteers to go to the Mars will be chosen from all over the world. The volunteers, who must be over 18 and would like to keep a good relationship with other people, should be prepared not to return to the earth. Some experts believe that it is very difficult to live on the Mars because of the cold weather, loneliness and fear. Some volunteers hold the belief that they will be the heroes if they succeed. Moreover, they want to know what life is like on the Mars because they are tired of the life on the earth.

【解析】

1、被動(dòng)句：Up till 2015, about 30 volunteers will be selected to go to the Mars.

2、定語(yǔ)從句：Those volunteers, who are over 18, should be ready to stay at the Mars forever and willing to get along well with others.

3、賓語(yǔ)從句：The experts point out that the life in the Mars will be rather difficult as a result of the cold weather, loneliness and fear.

也可以考慮使用過(guò)去分詞作狀語(yǔ)  Faced with the cold weather, loneliness and fear, the life in the Mars will be rather difficult.

4、 However, the volunteers say that they are tired of the life in the earth and expect to experience the life in the Mars.

可以使用過(guò)去分詞Tired of life in the earth, the volunteers expect to experience the life in the Mars.

5、 What’s more, they believe that they will be heroes once they succeed. 也可以使用if條件句What’s more, they believe that they will be heroes if they are successful.

【考點(diǎn)定位】

文章的取材來(lái)自于前段時(shí)間的移民火星的新聞話題，貼近時(shí)事。結(jié)合環(huán)保（地球生活太糟糕），志愿者招募，專(zhuān)家及個(gè)人看法描述命題。命題穩(wěn)中有新。

考點(diǎn)涉及：被動(dòng)句，定語(yǔ)從句，賓語(yǔ)從句，狀語(yǔ)從句，關(guān)聯(lián)詞，it作形式主語(yǔ)，同位語(yǔ)，分詞作狀語(yǔ)等。

時(shí)態(tài)涉及到了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。