Question

假定你是某中學的學生李華。請用英語給出版社編輯寫一封信，表達你對現在使用的英語教材的看法。

內容主要包括：

優點：1. 話題廣泛；

                    2. 圖片豐富；

                    3. 有助于提高學習興趣。

建議：適當降低詞匯難度。

注意：1. 詞數100 左右；

      2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

      3. 開頭語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。

Dear Editor,

    As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house.______________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________

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                                                                  Best regards,

                                                                  Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house. These books have many advantages. One of them is that we can find a variety of topics, such as science, culture and history. These topics, I think, are very popular with us students. What’s more, along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help us understand English better. Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject.

However, some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us. Therefore, I’d like to suggest changing them into easier ones.

                                                              Best regards,

                                                               Li Hua

【解析】本題是考生比較熟悉的體裁的一種：書信。同時也是一種半開放性作文，對考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生仔細梳理要點，認真謀篇布局，在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級詞匯，和合適的連接詞如what’s more,however,therefore等。同時可以穿插使用一些高級的句型，如強調句，狀語從句等，可以讓文章更上一個檔次。