Question

我校與韓國(guó)某中學(xué)是友好學(xué)校，對(duì)方校刊來信想了解我校本學(xué)期選修課開設(shè)情況。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提供的學(xué)生問卷調(diào)查得到的信息，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇報(bào)導(dǎo)。

課程門類	上課時(shí)間	最受歡迎的課	對(duì)課程的看法	建  議
二十余種 (學(xué)生可任選)	每周三和周五 下午 3:30—4:50	計(jì)算機(jī) 英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ) 藝術(shù)等	1．十分感興趣 2．學(xué)到許多課外 的知識(shí) 3．有大量的實(shí)踐 機(jī)會(huì)	1．增加選修課 2．減少作業(yè)量 3．多組織參觀， 了解社會(huì)

要求：1．報(bào)導(dǎo)需包括表內(nèi)提供的所有內(nèi)容。2．詞數(shù)100--120左右。報(bào)導(dǎo)題目已給出。
詞匯：optional course 選修課
Students Like Optional Courses
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                                
                                                                               

Answer 1

Students Like Optional Courses
This term our school has offered more than 20 optional courses, from which students can choose. The courses are given from 3:30pm to 4:50pm on Wednesday and Friday every week. And we students have benefited a lot from them.
In our school, students take great interest in the optional courses. Their favorites are computer, spoken English, arts and so on. They say they have learned much that is not taught in textbooks and they have got a great deal of practice. However, students are not quite satisfied. They hope more optional courses will be offered while their home-work should be less. They suggest that more trips and visits should be organized. Only in this way can they learn more about what is going on outside school. （126 words）

解析試題分析：考查提綱類作文，，要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，要求關(guān)于選修課開設(shè)情況寫一篇報(bào)導(dǎo)，根據(jù)下表提供的學(xué)生問卷調(diào)查得到的信息寫作，并同時(shí)提出自己建議。包括1．課程門類；2．上課時(shí)間； 3．最受歡迎的課；4.對(duì)課程的看法審題時(shí)注意本文使用的時(shí)態(tài)，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用省略句，倒裝句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句型準(zhǔn)確表述。如范文里面的They say they have learned much that is not taught in textbooks and they have got a great deal of practice..和Only in this way can they learn more about what is going on outside school.還有要用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞把文章串聯(lián)起來：象however,等等。
考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類短文寫作。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，詞匯句型的選用，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。