Question

假如你是李華，美國一所友好學校準備與你們學校共同創辦一份中學生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關情況。請你給他寫封回信，主要內容如下：

l.表示贊成；

2.提出你喜歡的欄目；

3.簡要說明理由。

注意：1. 詞數100左右；

2. 信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好；

3. 適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

4. 參考詞匯?欄目—column 。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. Green,

I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely  agree with you on that.  Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives  us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s  necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good  for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it!  Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things. Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：考查應用文中的書信的寫作。同時也屬于提綱類作文，要點都已經給出，審題時注意本文使用一般現在時，描述的時候要按照要點，可以適當增加細節，使文章更連貫，運用合適的語法規則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用省略句，倒裝句和強調句型準確表述。如范文里面的Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea.和 it’s  necessary to learn from each other.都是亮點。

考點：考查提綱類短文寫作。

點評：提綱類短文的關鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。