Question

假如你是劉寧，本學期剛轉學到另一個城市，不適應新環境，想給好朋友宋薇寫一封郵件，要點如下：

1．詢問近況，表達思念；

2．不習慣飲食和天氣；

3．聽課有困難；

4．沒有朋友，感到孤獨。

注意：

1．詞數120左右。

2．可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

Dear Song Wei,

                                                                                 

                                                                                   

                                                                                 

                                                                                   

                                                                                   

                                                                                  

                                                                                   

                                                                                 

                                                                                  

                                                                                  

                                                                                   

Yours sincerely,

Liu Ning

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Dear Song Wei,

I haven’t heard from you for a long time. How is everything going with you? I have been missing you since I got to this strange city.

To be honest, I am not used to the food here and the weather always makes me feel uncomfortable. For that reason, I find it difficult to concentrate on my studies. The new teachers are friendly but they speak too fast and with a certain accent that I cannot quite understand. This often discourages me in class. What’s worse, I always feel lonely after school since I don’t have good friends here. I really want to go back to my previous school, studying with you and playing together.

I’m very worried. Can you give me some help and good suggestions? I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Liu Ning

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于應用文，它是一封電子郵件。格式已經給出，可以直接進入正文的要點表達，但是不要拘泥于要點的表達，應該適當增加細節以使行文連貫，比如適當選用表示因果、遞進、轉折關系的連接詞語等。考生應注意層次結構及動詞的時態要準確到位。這里說的是現在的狀況，一般情況下，應該用一般現在時。

考點：提綱作文。

點評：考生不能遺漏要點要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，盡可能的使用較復雜的句子結構，盡量使用高級詞匯以便得到較高的分數。考生注意使用過渡詞或者過渡句來使文章讀起來比較流暢。動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作練習以外，還可以適當背誦一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。