Question

書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）
進(jìn)入高三以后，大多數(shù)同學(xué)覺得學(xué)習(xí)壓力大，時(shí)間緊，就不再花費(fèi)時(shí)間進(jìn)行體育鍛煉了。很多同學(xué)因此體質(zhì)下降。假如你叫李華，發(fā)現(xiàn)同學(xué)李明最近總是生病，決定給他寫一封信，告訴他體育鍛煉的益處和缺乏鍛煉可能出現(xiàn)的問題。
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Li Ming,
I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you are better now.
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With best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

One Possible Version:
Dear Li Ming,
I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you are better now. You have studied so hard that you have had no time for exercise, which is harmful to your health. I feel it would be more beneficial to your health if you could take more exercise in future.
Taking exercise can improve your physical health and refresh your mind. After one or two hours of exercise you can study better. Only when you have a strong body can you keep on studying without feeling tired. Otherwise your study will be interrupted from time to time by the sickness.
Exercise is as useful and important as your study. I hope you can take at least one hour’s exercise every day after you are recovered.
With best wishes!
Yours truly,
Li Hua

解析這篇書面表達(dá)是就進(jìn)入高三以后，大多數(shù)同學(xué)覺得學(xué)習(xí)壓力大，時(shí)間緊，就不再花費(fèi)時(shí)間進(jìn)行體育鍛煉，很多同學(xué)因此體質(zhì)下降的問題進(jìn)行闡述，第一段寫現(xiàn)象和解決辦法，第二段寫鍛煉的好處。寫作時(shí)要注意句型的運(yùn)用：如：You have studied so hard that you have had no time for exercise, which is harmful to your health.這句話里用了：so…that…句型，還有which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句。Only when you have a strong body can you keep on studying without feeling tired.這句話里用了倒裝句。