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　短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分１0分）
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同舊式寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞作斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
Dear Ms Smith,
I am secretary of the City Student Union (CSU). We were organizing an art
exhibition for high school students in city. This will be held on the 9^th of July
in the Exhibition Hall of Beihai. More than 1000 painting will be on show, but
high school students and teachers from all the eight districts will come to the event.
As you are very popularly with us Chinese high school students, we’d like to invite
For you to the exhibition. We would be grateful when you could join them that day.
Looking forward to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear Ms Smith,
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in ^ city .This will be held on the 9^th of July in the Exhibition Hall of Beihai.More
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districts will come to the event .As you are very popularly with us Chinese high school
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students, we’d like to invite for you to the exhibition .We would be grateful when you could join
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them that day .Looking forward to hear from you soon .
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Yours,
Li Ming

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