Question

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在此符號(hào)下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余 的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不記分。

Generally speaking, the relationship between us students and our family members and classmates as well as teachers are good. We are getting in well with each other. However, there exists some problems. Some students are easy to lose his temper because of anxious and study burden. They sometimes quarrel with others, which is very disappointed.

In my opinion, we middle school students should make our efforts to improving the situation. First, we should respect of other people. Second, when we are not feeling happy, we can chat our friends or teachers or even parents, It is likely whether they can understand us better and give us some reasonable advice.

Answer 1

Generally speaking, the relationship between us students and our family members and classmates as well as teachers are good. We are getting in well

                                is                on或along

with each other. However, there exists some problems. Some students are easy                                                     

exist

to lose his temper because of anxious and study burden. They sometimes

     their               anxiety

 quarrel with others, which is very disappointed.

                            disappointing

In my opinion, we middle school students should make our efforts to

improving the situation. First, we should respect of other people. Second, improve

when we are not feeling happy, we can chat ∧ our friends or teachers or

                                   with

even parents, It is likely whether they can understand us better and give us

                    that

some reasonable advice.