Question

英語課上，老師要求同桌同學相互修改作文。假設以下作文為你同桌所寫，請你對其進行修改。共有10處錯誤，每句最多兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。
3 必須按答題要求做題，否則不給分。
Dear Tom,
It is great to receive your email. Now I’d like tell you something which took place in my school yesterday.
In the afternoon we hold a grown –up ceremony for our coming 18 years old birthday. First we made an oath that as grown-up we should have a sense of duty for our social from now on. Then we showed our thanks for to our parents who had gone through hardships to bring us up and teachers who have been educating us patient. And our teachers also gave us cards expressed their good wishes to them. Finally, we put on wonderful performances, singing or dancing. We learned a lot from the activity. I think it’s very important for us. I will never forget the day in my life.
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

【小題1】would like后面加to
【小題2】which改成that
【小題3】hold改成 Held
【小題4】grown-up后面加s
【小題5】social改成society
【小題6】for改成to
【小題7】expressed改成 expressing
【小題8】patient改成 patiently
【小題9】us.改成them
【小題10】or改成 and

解析【小題1】固定結構would like to do sth
【小題2】先行詞是指物的不定代詞，關系代詞用that
【小題3】講述的是過去發生的故事，用過去時
【小題4】成年人的復數在grown后面加
【小題5】society是名詞“社會”
【小題6】show sth to sb向某人展示sth
【小題7】兩者之間構成主動關系用現在分詞的形式
【小題8】修飾動詞用副詞
【小題9】這里是給他們的祝福
【小題10】上下文是并列關系而非選擇關系