Question

假設(shè)你是Joe，你的好朋友Betty因?yàn)檫^(guò)于在意考試結(jié)果而感到焦慮，請(qǐng)給她寫一封信，談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ�并且給她一些建議。

Answer 1

Dear Betty,
Knowing that you care too much about the result of the coming exam, I am quite worried. Actually, the most important thing is not the result of the exam but the learning journey.
　　There are some effective ways to calm down. First, keeping reminding yourself to stay in peace is the most helpful. Second, it will help you to relax if you spare some time doing some after school activities like sports. Finally, talk to your parents and friends, who are always ready to comfort you. In a word, the result itself is not really important, but we should work hard while learning.
Yours,
Joe

試題分析：
這是一篇給材料作文。本文要寫的材料比較具體，一是要我們說(shuō)出自己的看法，二是給Betty一些建議。我們要做的就是運(yùn)用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。我們要好好選用詞匯和短語(yǔ)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文是書信體，主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，要用好表示建議的句子。注意行文的連詞，如first, second,等等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】
這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色.如: care too much about，is not the result of the exam but the learning journey，calm down, reminding yourself to stay,學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。