Question

假如你是一個無錫新市民，你叫Luo Hui, 來自湖南，目睹了無錫最近幾年的發展和變化，有喜有憂。于是你就給政府有關部門發了一份e-mail，談了一些自己的想法，并提出了一些合理的建議，內容要點如下：
1. 最近幾年無錫發展很快；比如，道路變寬了；城里可供人們休閑的場所也多了；這里的人們過著幸福的生活；
2. 但是還存在一些嚴重的問題：房價太高，許多人根本買不起房子；因為工業的發展，水和空氣被嚴重污染；人們很難呼吸到新鮮空氣。
3. 我的建議：……
注意：1. 短文須包括所有內容要點，要求語句通順，意思連貫；
2. 第3要點作2-3句話的適當發揮；
3. E-mail的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
4. 詞數：80個詞左右。
Dear Sir or Madam,
How are you? It’s my great pleasure to write this e-mail to you.
My name is Luo Hui. I’m a middle school student. I moved to Wuxi with my parents five years ago because my parents found work here. ________________________________________
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Yours sincerely,
Luo Hui

Answer 1

 
Wuxi has developed quickly. For example, the roade become wide. There are many place for people to relax. Tth people here are living a happy life.
But there are still some problems. The prices of th e house are too high. Many people can’t afford to buy them at all. Water and air are badly terribly polluted. It is difficult for people to breathe fresh air.
I think we should stop some factories from dumping their waste into the river. We should also encourage people to protect our environment.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱式的給材料作文。要求介紹無錫市的變化及存在的問題，并提出自己的建議。
【亮點說明】這篇短文能表達出所有的要點，并提出了合理的建議。同時連詞的應用和句式的變化也給文章增色不少.如For example, But， It is difficult for people to breathe fresh air.。