Question

生活中，你經歷過糟糕的一天嗎？那天發生了什么事情？你是如何度過的呢？請以“My bad day”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，投稿給《英語園地》的征文“That’s our real life.”
注意：1. 文中不得出現真實的人名、地名等個人信息。
2. 文章的標題及開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
My bad day
We often meet with bad days. ________________________________________________
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Answer 1

My bad day
We often meet with bad days. I met a bad day on Sep 1. It was the first day of this new term. When I woke up in the morning, it was nearly 7 o’clock. I had a quick wash and rushed to school without breakfast.
When I reached school, I realized I didn’t bring my homework. I felt anxious and had to go back home to fetch it. On the way home I ran as quickly as I could. Suddenly I was knocked down by a bike and my knees were terribly hurt. And I was immediately sent to hospital. I didn’t have any classes that day.
What a bad day I had!

試題分析：那天發生了什么事情？你是如何度過的呢？本文要求以“My bad day”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文說說生活中，你經歷過的糟糕的一天，那天發生了什么事，你如何度過，投稿給《英語園地》的征文“That’s our real life.根據要求本文應該以第一人稱來寫作，主要使用一般過去時態，在寫作中，可以適當發揮想像，使用一些連接詞，做到段落分明，表達準確。
【亮點說明】本文語句流暢，表達準確。使用了一些復合句如When I reached school, I realized I didn’t bring my homework.；On the way home I ran as quickly as I could.等等，這些都為文章增色不少。