Question

請你根據(jù)所給的提綱以“A Person With A Traditional Skill”為題， 寫出你眼中一位身懷傳統(tǒng)技藝的人物。字?jǐn)?shù)在80個詞左右。

Name	Li Qiyi
Age	65歲
Appearance（外貌）	中等身高，有點瘦，短頭發(fā)，戴眼鏡。
Specialty（特長）	擅長剪紙藝術(shù)，4歲開始從父學(xué)剪紙，有一雙很靈巧（skillful）的手，常常只需要幾分鐘就能用剪刀將彩紙剪成各種各樣的形狀，如動物、花兒和人物等。
Your opinion（觀點）	。。。

Answer 1

Li qiyi is a 65-year-old man ,He is of average height and a little thin,He has short hair and he is wesring glasses .
Li qiyi is good at paper cutting,He began to learn paper cutting from his father when he was very young ,He works very hard ,He has a pair of killfull hands ,He uses color paper and scissors in his work ,He can finish one piece of work in only a few minutes,His work are in all kinds of shapes ,Such as animals ,plamts and characters.
I think Li qiyi’s works are really fantastic .I should learn from him ,And we should help this traditional skill forever.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容的要求介紹你眼中一位身懷傳統(tǒng)技藝的人物L(fēng)i Qiyi。
從他的年齡；外貌；特長等方面進行介紹。本文要用到第三稱單數(shù)，和對于他的剪紙藝術(shù)的學(xué)習(xí)還要用到過去式。
【亮點說明】這篇短文不僅介紹人物時注意避免句式重復(fù)而且使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。.如began to learn paper cutting；learn from等。還用到了征求建議的語氣I should learn from him ,And we should help this traditional skill forever.表達了作者的觀點，使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。