Question

假如你是Daniel，請根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一份電子郵件給報(bào)社，提出環(huán)保倡議。
1. 今年春天中國政府下定決心治理污染，使天變藍(lán)，水變綠；
2. 我覺得最嚴(yán)重的問題是空氣污染，空氣污染導(dǎo)致了許多健康問題；
3. 我們要少開車，可以騎自行車外出，自行車不產(chǎn)生空氣污染；
4. 要多種樹，樹能夠使空氣清潔；
5. 我覺得……
注意：1. 請根據(jù)以上提供的信息來進(jìn)行寫作，第五個(gè)要點(diǎn)根據(jù)主題用1-2句話自由發(fā)揮
2. 表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫
3. 詞數(shù)：80詞左右；開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù).
Dear editor,
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I am looking forward to hearing from you!
Best wishes!
Daniel

Answer 1

One possible version：
Dear editor,
This spring, the Chinese government has decided to solve the pollution problems so that we can have blue sky and green water. I think the most serious problem today is air pollution. It has caused a lot of health problems. We should drive cars out less. We can ride a bike instead because bikes produce no air pollution. We should plant more trees. Trees can help to make our air clean. I think we should try to use clean energy. It’s everyone’s duty to protect the environment.
I am looking forward to hearing from you!
Best wishes!
Daniel

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。本文主要應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)，及一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。所以在寫作時(shí)，要尤其一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)及情態(tài)動詞的表達(dá)方式。聯(lián)系實(shí)際，號召全國人們行動起來保護(hù)環(huán)境。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式號召人們應(yīng)該行動起來，為文章增色不少。如: We should ，We can ，we should try to ，It’s everyone’s duty to，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語, 寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。
考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。