Question

最近電視上的公益廣告都在播“我光盤，我光榮”行動，號召全國人們“文明用餐，節儉惜福”。假如你是學生會主席，請你聯系實際，以學生會的名義寫一篇題為“Save Food”的倡議書。可適當發揮。要求： 字數在80字左右。文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
提示：1．不要浪費食物。吃光盤中所有食物。   2．外出就餐不要點太多食物，夠吃就好。
3．就節約糧食提兩條或兩條以上自己的建議。

Answer 1

One possible version：
Dear students,
  Many people are still hungry in our country. But a lot of food is wasted every day. So we must take action to save food.
  First, we should eat up all the food when we have meals at home. Second, while dining out, we’d better not order food more than we can eat. If you want to taste different kinds of food, you can order half dish. If the food is still left, you can pack the food and bring it home. In addition, when going shopping, don’t buy too much food at a time, because the food usually goes bad easily.
  Let’s get started from the small to save food!

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態。本文主要應用一般現在時，所以在寫作時，要尤其一般現在時態及情態動詞的表達方式。聯系實際，號召全國人們“文明用餐，節儉惜福”。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式號召人們應該行動起來，為文章增色不少。如: We should eat up all the food when we have meals at home. Let’s get started from the small to save food! 學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語, 寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。
考點：提綱作文。