Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（共1小題；滿分20分）
在陽(yáng)光雨露里，我已長(zhǎng)高、長(zhǎng)壯，但這還不是全部，長(zhǎng)大還應(yīng)包括什么？是關(guān)心、幫助同學(xué)？是體貼、理解父母？是感恩、回報(bào)親朋師長(zhǎng)？還是……，成長(zhǎng)的點(diǎn)點(diǎn)滴滴，久久不能忘記。請(qǐng)以I Am Not a Child Any More為題，記敘你在學(xué)習(xí)生活中經(jīng)歷的一件或兩件事，表明你已經(jīng)不再是一個(gè)下孩子。
要求：1.請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給題目，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，不少于80詞；
2.語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔；
3.文中不得使用你的真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)算
I am not a child any more,

Answer 1

I am not a child any more
I have changed a lot during the past three years. I used to be weak and short. But now, I am strong and as tall as my father. The most important thing is that I have learned to care about others.
It was a Wednesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal. I didn’t know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said the meal was very delicious, although it tasted salty. At bedtime, I fetched hot water for my mother to wash feet.
My mother said, “Dear, you are really grown up.”
It was the first time that I had realized I was not a child any more.

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。記述成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程中的一件或是兩件難忘的事，根據(jù)材料提示完成寫(xiě)作，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如:：used to“過(guò)去常常”；not...until“直到……才”；not...any more“不再”；grow up“長(zhǎng)大”等以及一些復(fù)合句的使用。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。