Question

假設英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\)劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； .
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Last week I went to visit to my former neighbor, Mr. Yang. He and I used to living next to
each other for many years. About half a year ago, an order came which the old building, along
with many other similar ones, were going to be pulled down to make room for a main street.
So I had to move apart. Mr. Yang now lives in the suburbs near a beautiful park. His new
apartment is much big than before. The only problem is that it took quite a long time to get to
the downtown area. Therefore, Mr. Yang doesn’t seem to worry about the long distance. He
says that new subway line is to be built in a few year and he is sure life will be better in
the future.

Answer 1

【小題1】去掉to
【小題2】living改成live
【小題3】which改成that
【小題4】were改成was
【小題5】I改成we
【小題6】big改成bigger
【小題7】took改成takes
【小題8】Therefore改成However
【小題9】that后面加 a
【小題10】year改成years

解析試題分析：
【小題1】去掉to，因為visit是及物動詞
【小題2】living改成live，因為這里的used to是過去常常
【小題3】which改成that，因為這是個同位語從句，同位詞是an order
【小題4】were改成was 因為主語是the old building, alongwith many other similar ones,和t e old building一致，用單數謂語
【小題5】I改成we ，因為是用we代替Mr. Yang. He and I
【小題6】big改成bigger，因為much后面接形容詞的比較級
【小題7】took改成takes，因為這篇短文用的是一般現在時
【小題8】Therefore改成However，因為前面是到市中心要很長的距離，后面說楊老師不擔心距離，用however。
【小題9】that后面加 a，因為這里指“一個新地鐵”
【小題10】year改成years ，a few后面修飾可數名詞復數
考點：考查短文糾錯
點評：考查考生對全文的理解和在上下文中運用語法的能力和上下文串聯的理解力。特別是名詞的單復數，形容詞副詞的變化和固定搭配。